备战2023年新高考英语一轮复习考点41 读后续写06 助人型(原卷版)

典型是：流泪；心里想…… 流泪： 1. Tears blurred one's eyes. 2. One's eyes got misty. 3. One's eyes misted/dimmed with tears.泪眼模糊 4. ...be close to tears几乎要哭了 5. tears (roll down one's eyes/cheeks/face)泪水落下 【 困难处境】 1. As the economy was in decline(经济衰退), some people in the town had lost their jobs. Many of their families were struggling to make ends meet (使收支平衡). （2020.7高考山东卷） 2. There was a man sick in bed(卧病在床), his wife, who took care of him and could not go out to work, and their little boy. （2020.7高考山东卷） 3. But one day, a hurricane hit the area (台风袭击当地) where he lived, completely destroying his home (完全摧毁他的家) . （2021广州2月联考） 助人过程呈现（想到办法+动作链） 【（1）突然有了一个想法：一句话表示想法】 典型：某人想到/明白...; 有了主意 1. It suddenly occurred to sb that 从句=It hit sb that 从句=It struck me that 从句 =It dawned on sb that 从句 2. (idea, thought...) occurred/came to sb.=...came/flashed into one's mind=...crowded in one's mind 3. One's mind began to race 【（2）动作链】 Then he got a saw (锯子) from the truck and cut a section out of a big log on the side of the road. We rolled it over and put his jack on top, and we were in business.然后他从卡车上拿到了一把锯子（锯子），从路边的一根大木头上砍了一段。我们把它翻过来，把他的杰克顶放在上面，我们开始做生意。【八省联考】 皆大欢喜结局（感激+感动+升华） 【（1）皆大欢喜：过了一段时间，事情有了最后的转折】

过了一段时间 1. not long after that,...=shortly afterwards, ...=before long, ...=It didn't take long before 从句=It took some time before从句不久, ... 2. for an instant/moment一瞬间 【（2）有了结果】 1. To one's surprise(delight)/Strangely enough, it turned out that 从句 2. But on second thoughts, ...但是转而一想，... 3. But what happened next was pure magic. 接下来发生的非常奇妙 【（3）感谢】 1. Now, I was definitely grateful to her for extending a helping hand(伸出援手).（2021届湖南长沙市一中高三月考三） 2. Molly and Shawn met on Tuesday, and she says she couldn’t thank him enough (非常感谢他)and everyone involved in for what they did for her. （2020届山东省泰安市高三第二轮复习质量检测（二模）英语试题） 【（4）感动】 1. Needless to say, they were deeply moved (他们被深深地感动了), especially Bernard who finally found a way to make money for his family. （2020.7高考山东卷） 2. He was touched that I, a complete stranger, cared so much about him (如此关心他) and said he was willing to work.（2021广州2月联考） 3. In a flash, with tears welling up in my eyes, I was touched beyond words (感动得说不出话来). I felt so warm as if there were nine suns in my chest. （2021年1月八省联考） 4. I nodded in gratitude, eyes glistening with held-back tears(眼睛因为强忍的泪水而闪耀). （2021年1月八省联考） 5. Stunned and moved(惊讶又感动), I stared at the note, feeling a pang of guilt about my previous thought that all people were indifferent.（2021年1月八省联考） 【（5）升华】 1. It is love that makes the world go round（是爱让世界运转）and Bernard felt it deep in his little heart.（2020.7高考山东卷） 2. Everyone was happy and sweet, exposing their sets of white teeth（露出他们洁白的牙齿）.（2020.7高考山东卷） 3. I made up my mind to pass on “love” to others（传递爱给其他人）. Just as a saying goes : “ Roses given, fragrance in hand（赠人玫瑰，手有余香）. ”（2021年1月八省联考） 4. From that day on, every time I meet someone who needs help, I always reach out to them, hoping to pass on the

kindness （希望传递善意）that Mexican family offered me.（2021年1月八省联考） 5. Sometimes, a small act of kindness may be powerful enough to make a huge difference（会有很大不同）. 【模拟题 1】（2022·广东天河·二模） 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 How exciting! Today is my basketball Grand-final! My team of six enthusiastic boys led by our coach, Jack, has worked extremely hard just to make the finals. My heart was pounding a hundred kilometres an hour as I walked into our home ground. As I hurried to our team bench, our opponents caught my attention. They seemed a lot taller and “meaner” looking. Whistle blew. Five of us started on the court. Our opponent got hold of the ball first. They were unbelievably fast. They kept breaking our defences and kept scoring goals. Excited parents were cheering so much that their faces were as red as beetroots. Even our best, Bryce, could not stop our opponents from scoring, which annoyed him a lot. By half time, both teams were extremely exhausted and our opponents were ten goals ahead, which presented us with an enormous but achievable challenge. Jack was awfully anxious as we were not playing anywhere near our best. He told us that we could still win if we made our transitions much quicker so that penalty shots came our way.He also directed us to rebound (抢断篮板) and position ourselves better to receive and score goals. Most important, he reminded us to play as a team. Our team was all fired up. The second half started in our favour. We were as quick as lightning on the court. We were dribbling (运球), passing, shooting and rebounding without any mistakes. We caught our opponents by surprise. The scores were almost level. We were trailing only by one point. The crowd was growing wild with excitement, fuelling our confidence. At the same time, our opponents switched back to attention and started playing like what they did in the first half, making it harder for us to score. One minute left! Our opponent threw in the ball but I managed to steal it! Our team was bursting with happiness! More opponents were heading my way and I had to pass the ball to Bryce. Instead of passing on the ball, he did the most unexpected thing. He tried to score from half court! He missed by miles! 注意: 1.续写词数应为150左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Then I noticed Jack signaled to the referee for a pause. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Whistle blew again and we came back to the court.

_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【模拟题 2】（2022·福建泉州·三模） 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 What It Means to Serve I didn’t continue college after graduation. I moved out of my family. With little work experience, I served as a waitress. But during the five years’ labor, I found myself burning calories running about only for a tip. I had had enough so I moved to a smaller town hoping to pursue a college degree. I promised I would never serve people again - at least not in such way. It was time to serve myself. Luckily, I received a position as an afterschool program tutor at a local middle school, with the added benefit of completing English education degree. I had the opportunity to go big! The kid would need me - a role model and a trustworthy friend, I believed. But my first day was welcomed by the students’ indifference (冷漠). The desks were messy and the whole room smelled of dirty gym socks. My excitement began to die down. I doubted whether the new job was a mistake. The playground activity was deafening while homework time was not much better. After my repeated persistence, they finally turned off the playground mode. But just a few minutes passed when I noticed two kids quarreling in the corner. I supposed it was another little incident but one kid named Jeremy bothered me. He shouted at me for coming at him. And when I asked them to return to their seats, he slammed (用力摔) his backpack and grew mad as I tried to urge him to take the right attitude. “I don’t like you, homework and this afterschool program! All you guys do is yell at me. I’m never coming back.” he walked out of the classroom, slamming the door. Naturally, I was so frustrated (挫败的). I wondered why I am here. Most kids disrespected me! I paused to take a deep breath. Then suddenly I thought to myself, “You said you would never serve people again, but you don’t understand what these kids really need.” At that moment, I remembered my middle-school life. I always had a poor attitude, never did my schoolwork, repeatedly got into fights, and disrespected my elders. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Realizing I was not different, I walked out into the hall and caught up with Jeremy. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________At that moment, my heart broke for this boy and his family life. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________ 【模拟题 3】（2022·海南·模拟预测） 阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短义。 My knees started shaking, yet my body froze. It felt as though my soul departed my body and I had no control over it. Anxiously, I looked through the roster (名单) posted on the wall of the locker room. My heart was beating harder and harder as I slowly saw all my friends’ names on that list but could not find mine. At that moment, I froze. I just could not accept that all my friends were on the basketball team while I was not. I was so convinced there was a mistake that I went and found the coach. “Hey coach, are you sure that the roster you posted is correct?” I asked anxiously, dreading (担心) his answer. “Yes, the names on the list are finalized. Sorry if you did not make it this year, there is always next year,” the coach replied. I could feel the hot, bitter tears filling my eyes, and I ran out of the room as fast as I could. Trying to forget about the situation, I headed over to the cafeteria to buy some food. I felt dead inside, like nothing mattered. Walking was such a burden that it felt as if I had a 100-pound weight tied to my backpack. My mind was also blank for the rest of the school day. Everything my teachers said went in one ear and out the other. After school, as I walked to the parking lot to get picked up, I saw all my friends gathered near the rear of the lot, celebrating and joking around. I detoured (绕道) around the side of the school to avoid them, trying not to think about being the only one in our friend group failing to make the team. I saw my father’s car pull up near the school lot, and I walked up to the car and got in. He smiled at me, played the radio, and started driving home. 注意∶1. 续写词数应为150左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Noticing my bad mood, he asked me what was wrong. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Inspired by what my father said, I decided to work toward my goal. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【模拟题 4】（2022·福建莆田·二模） 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 A long time ago, when I worked in Ahmedabad, we would often drive to Mount Abu for short trips—it took us anywhere between seven to eight hours to drive up. That year, my close relatives were visiting from Lucknow during the holidays, and we made a plan to visit Abu for three days. Since there were seven of us, including my

brother’s family who also lived in Ahmedabad, we hired two cabs. We picked ourselves into the vehicles, stacked (堆放) our luggage on the carriers on top and started out. A good time was bad by all, and soon it was time to return. During the journey back, we stopped at a Dhaba for tea and snacks near the Mehana district. That’s when I noticed suddenly that the rope with which the luggage was tied on and of the carriers had come loose and one of the suitcases was missing. It must have fallen off somewhere along the way. Although it didn’t contain any valuables—just clothes and some cash, we decided to retrace our steps, drawing back four kilometres, looking for the bag. But luck wasn’t our friend: we could not locate it and returned to Ahmedabad depressed. After about a month, one day, while in my office, I got a call from my assistant that a certain Mr. Shah wanted to see me. I was in the middle of a meeting so he was asked to wait. After I got done, I called him into my office. I was looking after the development of small industries in the state at the time, so my immediate query was. “How can we help you? Do you want to set up an industry or are you facing any issues in your enterprise?” To which he said, “No, sir. I have not come for any official help. It is a personal matter. Did you lose something recently?” Of course, it all came back to me and I told him about the lost suitcase from the cab back from Mount Abu a month ago. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Then Shah told his side of the story. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ But the gentleman insisted on delivering the suitcase to me. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【模拟题 5】（2022·福建福建·一模） 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 A New Addition to the Family For the initial ten years of his life, Victor was the prince of the household. As he was an only child, his parents petted him and showered all their love and attention on him. Whatever toys his parents bought, they were always meant for him. Whatever food was in the refrigerator, there was no one to compete with him to polish it off first. Victor could leave his toys or books around the house with complete ease of mind, knowing that

there was no one who would get their hands on his belongings and cause any damage. However, all that was to change overnight when Victor’s parents brought back his new baby sister, Lina, from the hospital. With her rosy cheeks, wide open eyes and angelic smile, Lina caught the hearts of her parents, grandparents and relatives. Everyone focused their attention on the cute bunch of joy. Whenever she cried, her mother or father would rush to her bed. She simply cried because she wanted to be carried. There was little time left for Victor. Now that Victor’s mother had his baby sister to take care of, she expected Victor himself to do most of the chores he can do. Victor was asked to clean his own room, iron his own school uniform and clean his own shoes. Before Lina’s arrival, he had never lifted a finger to help out with these tasks. The whole family also went out less because it was unhealthy to expose Lina to the bacteria(细菌) being in the outside world too often. Victor felt neglected by his parents. He felt that they loved Lina more than him. As a result, he tried to attract his parents’ attention by becoming resistant. One evening, Victor’s parents were called up by his teacher because Victor had got into a fight at school. His teacher had noticed Victor’s behaviour and work attitude changing downwards in the past two months. Before that, he had been a model student. 注意：1.续写词数应为150左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡相应位置作答。 Upon hearing the teacher’s feedback, Victor’s parents got lost in thought. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Victor realized that his parents still cared for him. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【模拟题 6】（2022·重庆·一模） 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 My father is a practical man. He can’t explain calculus(微积分)，but he can tell you how much pressure a boiler needs. He can’t draw an architect’s plan, but he can tell you if the pipes and wiring will sustain the structure. He put himself through night school to become an engineer, but that was only after he worked a slumber, an electrician, and a mechanic. One day we walked by a toy store window. Sitting in the comer was the most unusual doll-house I’d ever seen. It was shaped liked an upturned log（原木）. Little oval windows decorated with nice curtains and framed by tiny balconies were cut into it. “Oh, Daddy,” I said, “isn’t it beautiful? Do you think Santa Claus will bring it to me?” Dad looked at the $100 price tag, silent — that’s a rather big figure in those days. “I think even Santa couldn’t afford this house,” he joked, lifting up his belt as he often does when he’s nervous. “Maybe one day,

sweetheart.” On Christmas morning, I awoke early and raced downstairs. In the dim light, I made out a lot of wrapped boxes under the tree — but none large enough to contain my dollhouse. Dad could see my disappointment He pulled me onto his lap and gently told me how, as a boy, he had wanted a red wagon, but his father couldn’t afford one. He said he made his own from wood and old wheels he found. “I’ll make one for you,” Dad assured me. And right after Christmas, despite all the unfinished projects at home, he started it. I naively（幼稚地）thought it was an easy toy to make, but every step of the long process was considerably more complex than I had anticipated. Night after night, Dad would come home from his job dead tired, yet he’d always find time to work on the log house. In the dark yellow electric light, Dad was always busy creating my dollhouse. 要求： 1.续写词数应为150左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 I hesitated, wondering if I should help my father. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ In all, it took us one month of hard work. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________