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假如你叫李晨，你的美国朋友Linda 打算来中国度假。 请根据下面的要点提示，给她写一封电子邮件，简单 介绍一下中国的礼仪。

提示：1. 准时赴宴，见面握手、微笑2. 当你吃饱了，对 主人的劝菜应礼貌的回应 3. 告辞时，要对主人表示感谢。

Thanks for your message, I ’m happy to know that you are coming to China. Let me tell you the table manners in China. The way we eat food is different from yours. First, we eat with chopsticks instead of a knife and fork. You shouldn’t point at anyone with your chopsticks. It’s impolite to stick your chopsticks into your food. And it is not polite to make noise while eating, especially don’t talk too much when your mouth is full of food. Second , when you have porridge ,you are supposed to pick up your bowl to drink . In China, we always eat together, don’t forget to make a toast to the elder. Another difference is that we share the same dishes. Different countries have different customs, remember “When in Rome , do as the Romans do.”I hope you Will have a great time in China.

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Thanks for your message, Now I tell you something you need to know about table manners when you are in China. At first, you are supposed to eat with chopsticks. It’s rude to eat with your hands. Second, you shouldn’t make noise while eating, it’s not polite to do that. Finally, you shouldn’t point at anyone with your chopsticks. I believe you will get used to these table manners. I’ll write again, hope you are having a good time in China. 写作注意事项：

1. 语态、时态要准确无误。

2. 主谓语要一致，主语的人称和数要和谓语一致。 3. 注意人称代词的宾格形式。

4. 注意冠词用法，例如： He is an honest student.中的an不能写成a。 5. 注意拼写、标点符号和大小写。标点符号特别注意汉英的不同。 作文二： My favorite ________

My favorite kind of music is old music. I’ll Never Forget My Mom is my favorite song. I like it because it is beautiful. The lyrics are very great. It was written by Liu Zheng. Many famous singers like Cheng Lin, Liu Hegang, and Tan Jing once sang it. When I listened to it, I thought of my mom. The mother’s love is the greatest love in the world. I was moved by these lyrics. I think you should listen to it, because it can help us love our mothers more. 写作句式： My favorite _____ is …… I like…. because …. .it was written/ made… by …. . When I listen to / watch /read it, I feel … I think you should listen to / watch it because….

作文三：目前，绝大多数的学校因为管理因素要求学生每 天穿校服，然而处于青春期的中学 生因为爱美等心理因素，拒绝或排斥这一规定。

假如你叫李华，请你向编辑写一封 求助信，请他们帮你解决这个难题。要求：1.阐述正方和反方的观点和立场，条理 清晰，语句通顺，无语法错误。2. 80词左右。

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提示词：ask us to wear，argue with， a beautiful sight，concentrate… on …， feel uncomfortable，is bad for，have got no idea Dear editor,

Now our school asks us to wear school uniforms every day. We don’t want to, but we have to. We have argued a lot about this with our teachers, but it didn’t work . The teachers think that students should wear uniforms at school . However, I think the uniforms are ugly. And I think teenagers should be allowed to choose our

own clothes. our teachers are afraid that if we didn’t wear uniforms, we would pay more attention to other things. I disagree. If we wear our own clothes, we will feel comfortable and that is good for studying.

I have thought about this problem for a long time but have got no idea. What’s your opinion?

yours, Li Hua 作文四： 主题写作 安全问题篇 【审题思路】

1．明确主题：本文根据图片内容就“如何保持安全”这一话 题进行阐述；

2．写作要点：(1) 慎重交友；(2)遇险报警；(3) 安全饮食； (4)自己的观点； 3．时态：一般现在时； 4．人称：第一人称。 How to keep safe?

As teenagers, we should always keep safety in mind. But how can we keep safe? Here are some of my suggestions. First, we should be careful when we make friends (时间状语从句), especially on line. You aren’t supposed to meet friends without telling teachers or parents. Second, if we are in danger, we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe (目的状语从句). Also, we should eat healthily and safely. Eating food that goes bad (定语从句) will be bad for our health. Last , we must remember it is dangerous to swim alone in the river . In a word (进行简要总结), safety must come first!

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As teenagers, we should always keep safety in mind. But how can we keep safe? Here are some of my suggestions. First (与second，also，last使文章布局合理，条理清晰), we should be careful when we make friends (时间状语从句), especially on line. Second, if we are in danger (条件状语从句，一般现在时表示将来), we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe (目的状语从句). Also, we should eat healthily and safely. Eating food (动名词作主语，高级用法) that goes bad (定语从句) will do harm to our health. Last but not least, summer is coming, and we must remember it is dangerous to swim alone in the river(it作形式主语，to swim alone in the river作真正主语). (结合要点：说明自己的观点) In a word (进行简要总结), safety must come first!

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1.老师不厌其烦地给我们讲解这道题。(go out one’s way)

2. The teacher went out of her / his way to explain this problem to us.

suppose divide by mistake/ accident be supposed to go out of one’s way to do

lock without doubt have a point earthquake all of a sudden look up to smoke get ears pierced badly regret support manage to do society

keep ….away from make one’s own decision to do enter picnic belong to attend the meeting noise policeman wolf sleepy

prevent 。。。from express prefer spare stick to down shut off sense pain pity praise kiss relaxed drop by capital

make an effort to do passport blackboard northern eastern season knock on /at the door

be worth doing/ be worth +钱

manner 方式，方法 manners 礼貌 table manners good manners 有礼貌 empty behave well except

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习惯干某事（2）get used to doing / be used to doing

建议（2） suggestions(可数) advice（不可数）

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